I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello well done on your work please doing better on writing cause there is not as much of writing but well done on it has a lot of words that make you feel that you are there.
Ka pai, good work on sharing your descriptive writing Kavel! I like how you have included what you could see and hear. I wonder what other adjectives you could add?
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Hello well done on your work please doing better on writing cause there is not as much of writing but well done on it has a lot of words that make you feel that you are there.
ReplyDeleteKa pai, good work on sharing your descriptive writing Kavel! I like how you have included what you could see and hear. I wonder what other adjectives you could add?
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