I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai Kavel, these are good acrostic poems! I like how you came up with sentences rather than just words for each letter. I also like how the sentences are relevant to the topic of each poem. Well done!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Ka pai Kavel, these are good acrostic poems! I like how you came up with sentences rather than just words for each letter. I also like how the sentences are relevant to the topic of each poem. Well done!
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