I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
KIA Ora I was doing a visual art today and it was really slow and hard but slow and steady wins the race so I would like to see your viusal art on stopping th plastic pollution ka kite
Kia ora Kavel, I must say you are absolutely correct- slow and steady always wins the race. Well done on creating such a powerful poster using Google Drawing to share your thoughts on ocean pollution and why something needs to be done about it. What was the most interesting video you watched about ocean pollution or a text you read that really made you think?
kia ora kavel this is Hesioni your class mate i really like your drawing and the work you have done its super cool i think u should of add sea weed and other thing in the sea.
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Kia ora Kavel,
ReplyDeleteI must say you are absolutely correct- slow and steady always wins the race. Well done on creating such a powerful poster using Google Drawing to share your thoughts on ocean pollution and why something needs to be done about it. What was the most interesting video you watched about ocean pollution or a text you read that really made you think?
Kia ora Kavel I really must say I am Amazed by your work it shows a powerful meaning and message keep working hard and keep amazing people.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kavel I really love your work you have done please keep up the hard work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kavel I really think that you should post another blog please keep blogging also make it more interesting fun and exciting.
ReplyDeletekia ora kavel this is Hesioni your class mate i really like your drawing and the work you have done its super cool i think u should of add sea weed and other thing in the sea.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kavel, I really like this post! and the colours you used. I think this post is very encouraging.
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