I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Kavel and Tawhiri Thank you for sharing your character evaluations for Wolf Brother. I like how you have described specific events from the story to support your ratings. Next time it would be great if you gave a separate reason for each rating. For example, why did you give the bear a 10/10?
Kia ora Kavel,this is Viena your classmate and I read your work and it is amazing, I liked how you described how and why you rated them and also I liked how you talked about what happened in the story.
kia ora kavel i like how you only have 2 colours and how you rated your characters then described why you rated that much for them and i know you can do better then this;).darra
Marhaba Kavel, What lovely work. I like how you used a background that would make your writing stand out. I also like how you put name above your pictures. I would just like to suggest that you separate each reason for each rating. I found it quite hard to understand. I also suggest that elaborate.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Kavel and Tawhiri
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your character evaluations for Wolf Brother. I like how you have described specific events from the story to support your ratings. Next time it would be great if you gave a separate reason for each rating. For example, why did you give the bear a 10/10?
Kia ora Kavel,this is Viena your classmate and I read your work and it is amazing, I liked how you described how and why you rated them and also I liked how you talked about what happened in the story.
ReplyDeletekia ora kavel i like how you only have 2 colours and how you rated your characters then described why you rated that much for them and i know you can do better then this;).darra
ReplyDeleteMarhaba Kavel, What lovely work. I like how you used a background that would make your writing stand out. I also like how you put name above your pictures. I would just like to suggest that you separate each reason for each rating. I found it quite hard to understand. I also suggest that elaborate.
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Ruqayat
hey kavel i really like this but i think you need to add some surpises to the story and this is really good
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