I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Kavel Thank you for sharing your poem. I really like how you used rhyme. Next time it would be great if you spoke a little louder as it was a bit hard to hear! What was your favourite part of learning about slam poetry?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Kavel
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your poem. I really like how you used rhyme. Next time it would be great if you spoke a little louder as it was a bit hard to hear! What was your favourite part of learning about slam poetry?