I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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Hi my name is Johnathan and I go to Paparoa Range and I really liked this retell I really like the photo it looks really fun.The birthday sounds really cool and that is a lot of back flips that your cousins have did.
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Kia ora Kavel
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Thank you for sharing your Recount,
You should add more facts about gavity in manurewa,
Ka kite.Have a good day during lockdown.
Hi my name is Johnathan and I go to Paparoa Range and I really liked this retell I really like the photo it looks really fun.The birthday sounds really cool and that is a lot of back flips that your cousins have did.
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